a beautifully sad story...
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Thank you.
there were a few times where you explained what was happening for things that didnt need to be explained. Its a good story, but the explanations of what was going on was kinda annoying.
I understand now.
Thank you.
I tend to do that.
no problem
I was thinking of a comedy next.
interesting ^^
TheMajormel
show, dont tell
KeikyoNesshin
Elaborate?